Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Magic box

Magic box

On Monday Room  7 was playing a game called magic box.
The game is like this,you have to get blindfolded then the rest of the class has to don't give the answer  then there's somethin  g  in the magic box then the person that are guess what it is.
It was syraiah turn then when she put her hand in side the magic box she was scared
Then i was 3th to last then i put my hand in the magic box then i got a pink polka dot it `was smooth it smells like plastic. 

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  • I put my hand nervously into the box, and I felt
  • When Miss Ashley put the blindfold on, it felt like
  • The class giggled as


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Magic box

On Monday Room  7 was playing a game called magic box.

The game is like this,you have to get blindfolded then the rest of the class has to not give the answer then something is   in the magic box then the person that are guessing what it is in the box.

First ,It was syariah lee  turn  then when she put her hand inside the magic box she was scared because she didn't want to eat the masted.  

Then i was 3th to last then i put my hand in the magic box then i got a pink polka dot it `was smooth it smells like plastic.

It was funny because auckland got it straight away it was a tede bear.








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