I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Monday, July 27, 2020
Palestine Israel War
Today we have been talking about olden subjects back then like Temples, Walling Wall and Dome of the rock. Here is what we have been talking about for reading for today.
Friday, July 24, 2020
SHIPS
Today we have been talking about boats or ships that have different kind of pisces in on the outside.
We went in buddies my buddy was isi go check out his blog.https://tpsisilelit.blogspot.com/
Thursday, July 23, 2020
Wednesday, July 22, 2020
WRITING
Footsteps slowly creaked on every step of the stairs. The bedroom door handle turned slowly.
The door opened slowly SCREECH the door opened!
‘Happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday dear Jenny happy
birthday to you’ Vita happily sang to jenny with her breakfast, ‘Thank you
Vita, ‘ your welcome’ said the young couple.
Vita went to the other room to get ready while Jenny was having her breakfast.
Then after a while they both got in the car ready to go out to celebrate.
Jenny was so excited she couldn't wait to go where Vita was taking her,
‘ Just wait and see’ said Vita. They finally arrived at their location so Vita quickly covered her
‘ Just wait and see’ said Vita. They finally arrived at their location so Vita quickly covered her
eyes with a blindfold then took her to the top.
They finally got there then Jenny took the blindfold off, NOO Jenny said in fear.
‘It's gonna be okay’ said Vita, so they had a look at the rules. Next they
had to wear a wingsuit, helmet, goggles and a parachute bag. After that
they got into the plane to
had to wear a wingsuit, helmet, goggles and a parachute bag. After that
they got into the plane to
fly up to the drop zone.
They got ready to jump but first they had to wait for their leader so they know what to
Do.
A few minutes later they jumped off the plane, Jenny screamed non stop, couldn't
look down but luckily Vita was there supporting her and diving down down with her.
look down but luckily Vita was there supporting her and diving down down with her.
But as they went down the parachute couldn't work so they screamed loud with
bated breath and louder for the leader to help them.
Then the leader came down as fast as he could but the air pulled him back so he
tried his best to get down to them.
Then Vita quickly pulled every string that was there then finally got the parachute to
come out.
Then they slowly went down safely to the ground, then they all were safe
then all went to the road for a ride home.

then all went to the road for a ride home.
Monday, June 29, 2020
WRITING
This is my writing last week Friday.
CIRCUS
‘Welcome to the circus’ said John ‘WEE HOO’ the audience happily
clapped as they got into their seats. ‘Hello everyone our group is called
the five we are going to
present the most dangerous talent ever! So the group came out to get ready for
the show.
First the Five started the walking rope while juggling so the first animal the
saber tooth tiger went to walk the rope but as he was walking he was struggling
to walk so one of the instructions went up the ladder to get a stick so the tiger can
focus walking but as he got up the tiger was so so hungry so he thought it was a
random so the
The tiger tried to rush his walking to get to the man.
Suddenly the tiger struggled and falled slowly down the rope into a big bucket
that was opened, ‘Oh my god’ said one of the audience then the whole group all
went down to the tiger to check if he was alright but the tiger didn't move at all so
they called the ambulance. They arrived as fast as they could then he checked his
pouls but he was still breathing, ‘thank god’ said the instructor.
But as they were getting the saber tiger to safety another tiger was trying to walk
the rope so the group waited to see if he was gonna fall so they can catch him or
catch him in he was walking along the rope like it was nothing then he actually made
it then the instructor
decided to carry on the show. So then they went to do the high jump so then the five
all jumped it then moved on to the next one holding their breath the longest this talent
has never been shown before so everyone got out their snacks and drinks to enjoy this
dangerous talent. To start off they got the ambulance to come in case the tiger drowns
and then got these kinds of locks so he can balance underwater.
As he went down the instructor was timing how long, pass a few minutes the tiger was
still underwater then a few hours later he still hasn't came up so then they drown the water
then the instructor put a toy tiger in the pool so the audience can think he's dead but he
was actually on the side the whole time so then they opened the bucket so they can see
that the tiger is dead then they put the tiger on top of the circus then he swinged down
the circus suddenly the audience got shocked at the tiger because it wasn't the tiger
that went in the bucket it was the saber tiger that got injured.
Then after the people that were judging the show came on the stage then gave
them the 1st place trophy to the five groups then said ‘
well done people and animals you have shown us you can really do dangerous stuff!
After the show was over the group got into the train then got ready to go home but
then one instructor said ‘ I want to leave this circus stuff, i don't like when we get someone
injured, iI want to leave and go rest for three years then come back.
Then the group went to get ready then got to go to the KFC to eat so then they all went
then got big chickens for the animals and got their own chicken. Then the next day john
said ‘bye bye guys see yous when i see you’ then john went back home.
FEED BACK:
Good & Bad
- Punctuation 1. Need more dialouge
- Has Paragraph 2. more full stops
- Great sentences
- A lot of words
Monday, June 8, 2020
Genres of writing
✊๐ฟ Genres Of Writing✊๐ฟ
Today our class have been checking if we still know the ways of writing like Recounts, Persuasive, Information Report, Explaination and Narritive.
Today our class have been checking if we still know the ways of writing like Recounts, Persuasive, Information Report, Explaination and Narritive.
This is me , Wesleys and Isi's Work we have been talking about!
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