Room 7 vs room 8 line basketball

Room 7 vs Room 8 line basketball

On monday 27 of march 2017 we were all excited to go to kiwisport then kiwisport was cancelled.

Ather that everyone knew kiwisport was cancelled then Miss morison asked us to play line basketball with their class then we went outside then miss ashley told us to be boy girl boy girl then room 8 had to be boy girl boy girl.

 

Then we started line basketball then when it was my turn then when i got the ball then i ran fast like flash then i shot the ball in the hoop like michael jordan.

Then on my sced turn i ran like a lion but i didn't get it in then i was sad then i tried to get the ball the room 8 people but they got a goal.

Then everyone was happy because we won 3 to 1 then we were excited.     

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Magic box

Magic box

On Monday Room  7 was playing a game called magic box.

The game is like this,you have to get blindfolded then the rest of the class has to don't give the answer  then there's somethin  g  in the magic box then the person that are guess what it is.

It was syraiah turn then when she put her hand in side the magic box she was scared

Then i was 3th to last then i put my hand in the magic box then i got a pink polka dot it `was smooth it smells like plastic. 

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Magic box

On Monday Room  7 was playing a game called magic box.

The game is like this,you have to get blindfolded then the rest of the class has to not give the answer then something is   in the magic box then the person that are guessing what it is in the box.

First ,It was syariah lee  turn  then when she put her hand inside the magic box she was scared because she didn't want to eat the masted.  

Then i was 3th to last then i put my hand in the magic box then i got a pink polka dot it `was smooth it smells like plastic.

It was funny because auckland got it straight away it was a tede bear.